Monday, May 31, 2010

Random Bits of Poetry

We are studying poetry in school right now. Here are 2 poem I wrote at school.

Bath Time Blues

I'm five years old, I'm big and brave.
My bed's a rock, my house a cave!
I'll battle a lion, I'll battle a shark!
I'm not afraid of the dark! 
Or the monsters who hide in my closet to eat
Me after I've fallen fast asleep.
I'm not afraid of you at all! 
Go take a hike! Go to the mall!
Go east or west! Take any path!
 but I refuse to take a bath!


Passing Time 

I'm watching the minute hand move on the clock. 
I'm hearing the music of ticking and tocks.
Every day time moves so fast, 
but now I am counting the minutes go past.
Shh! I am watching the hands on the clock.

I'm watching the sun sail through the sky. 
I'm smiling at clouds as they float by. 
Every day, time moves so fast
But now I am counting the minutes go past.
Shh! I am watching the sun in the sky.

I'm watching my green garden grow.
I'm caring for seeds that I sow.
Every day time moves so fast, 
But now I am counting the minutes go past.
Shh! I am watching my green garden grow.

By Leah Bredenhof

9 comments:

  1. I love your poetry! Keep on writing.

    Hugs
    Oma

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  2. What excellent poems! You are a very talented writer, Leah!

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  3. hi leah,

    the first poem would work perfect with one powerpuff girls episode: buttercup refused to take a bath, and was busy battling monsters... but one day a monster ran away because she smelled so bad. she couldn't cope without any monsters to battle, so she submitted to taking a bath! :)

    take care,
    paul

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  4. Baths, that is what 5 year olds think of bath isn't it!?! I like how you describe how a 5 year old thinks! Great job.
    Mrs.H

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  5. You've always been such an excellent poet Leah - good work!! Auntie Gloria

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  6. Great job Leah!!!!!!!!!
    ~Aleana~

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  7. Leah, I found your blog today. I like blogging, too, and try to post 3 or 4 times a month, but it can be hard to remember! I am your newest follower. ;-)

    Aunt Lisa

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